Hey all…

So I’m finishing up the final touches on Book Two.

You’ve read 2 chapter so far of it online.

I know there’s a TON of issues with wardrobe malfunctions, grammar, spelling, and the like that I’ve been emailed about over the last months.

I was hoping you guys could take a look back through starting here….


…and post any thing you find wrong. I’m horrible at editing…and my wife…who usually is my editor…is dealing with our move.

So I just thought an extra set of eyes couldn’t hurt.