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By: CyanMage

CyanMage — Tue, 16 Nov 2010 15:04:19 +0000

Missed the letter

By: Dirk Bolero

Dirk Bolero — Tue, 26 Oct 2010 20:34:14 +0000

New reader. Missed the letter.
I am disappoint. ._.

By: Snugglepuss

Snugglepuss — Fri, 24 Sep 2010 01:48:00 +0000

Aw. I’m a new reader and I missed it.

By: Kgummy

Kgummy — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 23:15:10 +0000

Aww, missed the voting for what the letter said… Now it’ll bug me until I completely forget about it.

By: Silverwolf

Silverwolf — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:34:16 +0000

Orion: “Okay, Alex, this is a sword. The pointy end goes in the bad guy.”

By: esnipplee

esnipplee — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 22:10:40 +0000

i’m too late too see it D: serves me right for not coming often .

By: apstorm

apstorm — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 18:35:37 +0000

It’s changed to Kiwi since then.

By: bmonk

bmonk — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 23:09:34 +0000

Me too! Away at a workshop!

By: David

David — Thu, 12 Nov 2009 03:57:39 +0000

Great development with this chapter!
I do have one concern about this page, though. The portions of the letter that are still visible (e.g., not obscured by the panels) possibly lead the reader to make assumptions that are not accurate and could create confusion.

Specifically, the part that reads “I miss her every day!” is perfectly visible, but the reader cannot see that she is actually talking about her mother. This causes the reader to infer that she is likely talking about someone in Dreamland, other than Felicity, that she is unable to see anymore. Readers may then build into their assumptions the notion that Nichole misses seeing Nastajia, Kiwi, or someone else and then wonder why this is not fully explored later.

By: Raphael

Raphael — Thu, 12 Nov 2009 03:46:15 +0000

I’m a man… In spite of these beautiful female picture… It was automaticaly chosen by this blog).