One of the things I like to do with Dreamland is to try and convey a “Cinematic” storytelling experience.
Today’s page…I hope comes across that way.
Panel 1: The sword lands into the ground near Nastajia
Panel 2: We see the sword from her point of view.
Panel 3: We focus from the sword to Nastajia as she realizes…SHE’S not the only one who see’s the sword.
Panel 4: We see Nicodemus realizes it’s free for anyone to take.
Some days it works. Some days it doesn’t.
Honestly…I’m not sure which day this is…ha ha.
But I thought it’d be fun to talk about what I was ATTEMPTING nonetheless.
Anyways. Hope it works. And hope you like.
Here’s today’s vote incentive. I added text (as suggested).