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By: ShinyHappyGoth

ShinyHappyGoth — Fri, 10 Aug 2012 12:47:24 +0000

Though if it’s the first choice, it needs another comma. “Rising from the shadows, the wraiths appeared, filling the streets without warning.”

By: Grace

Grace — Tue, 07 Aug 2012 14:24:43 +0000

Just a quick note, the first bubble should read “Rising from the shadows, the wraiths appeared AND filled the streets with no warning.” Awesome work with everything else, as always.

By: Terry W.

Terry W. — Tue, 07 Aug 2012 13:30:48 +0000

As Prince Demitri said, “the wraiths appeared filled the streets…” needs to be changed.

By: Charles Ranier

Charles Ranier — Mon, 06 Aug 2012 21:54:15 +0000

oh yes, molto bene!

By: Prince Demitri

Prince Demitri — Mon, 06 Aug 2012 06:43:40 +0000

Re-write suggestion for the first panel:

“Rising from the shadows, the wraiths appeared filling the streets without warning.”
-OR-
“Rising from the shadows, the wraiths appeared and filled the streets without warning.”

(“Without” and “With no” are word flavor choice… However “[...] the wraiths appeared filled the streets [...]” is a grammatical error.)

By: jonwaynew

jonwaynew — Mon, 06 Aug 2012 06:28:25 +0000

Wishing I could go back and erase these comments. Just reread pages and found I had skipped over the part that King and Queen were spotted by the guardians a FEW DAYS AFTER being captured by Nic, which totally invalidates my theory of the wraiths’ trip to Seraphopolis after Nic had regained the amulet from Alex and gang.

And Kudos to Julie for getting it right.:)

By: Exxos

Exxos — Mon, 06 Aug 2012 01:41:28 +0000

The last panel, I am so tempted to pop in a caption, “Look, sir! Droids!”

By: someonecool

someonecool — Sun, 05 Aug 2012 08:46:34 +0000

The last shot reminds me of the ringwraiths from Lord of the Rings (Especially cause the amulet looks like a ring at that angle)

By: Serrinatta

Serrinatta — Sat, 04 Aug 2012 15:52:05 +0000

Reminds me of Bengie from Vampire Hunter D: Bloodlust… but then, he also killed people by stabbing their shadows.

By: Captain Radar

Captain Radar — Sat, 04 Aug 2012 12:50:27 +0000

Love the wraiths’ armor,reminds me of those actions figures they had during the 1980s!