So, this was originally (according to my script) the first page after the Pharaoh’s tale).
I like the abruptness of it all (after finding out what happened to her parents).
But if you could please re-read the last dozen pages or so and tell me if it still has its “punch” after inserting the “explanatory fillers” of the last two pages… I’d appreciate it.
I finished a Nastajia Ashenheart Art Nouveau Watercolor Painting the other day.
I put the original up on Kickstarter as one of the pledges (it sold in 15 minutes).
So, I now have 125 high end prints available as up-pledges if anyone’s interested.
Nicodemus Plushes…here we come!