Thank you for pointing out that the Medicine Bag was given back to Orion back at page 999.
I think I’ll change yesterday’s page to being the necklace.
What would I do without you all?
Never Split The Party Man!
And never let that darn thief out of sight!
But, as Maxwell64 noted, it worked in LOTR. Eventually there were, what, 5 or 6 groups (including allies they got moving) going every-which way. And it all worked out, except for that weak Boromir, who reaped the reward of his treachery.
And Merry and Pippin even found a casket of Shire leaf to replenish their supplies!
“That’s it. The Fellowship is broken!”
This looks like it’s about to get much more interesting. Nice job. Keep up the good work!
But the last time they split up, we got Felicity, Kiwi, and Paddington as air-pirates!
Maybe now they’ll be a little graver since they’re not looking for something.
Awesome sky background!!!
D.B.U.T.T! Don’t Break Up The Team! (Carlson and Peters, page 823)
Oh dang, where’s that from again?
Carlson and Peters, page 823 of course.
Kidding. It’s from Beyond Good and Evil. Double H said that.
That’s a quick-witted answer to a dfifiuclt question
What a nice page!
Also, I don’t really see what the big deal is. They split up before, didn’t they? Maybe sending a smaller party to the Nightmare Realm will leave them undetected.
Or just keep them from getting party wiped.
INcredible art. I’m soo close to drooling all over meself. ^^ Holy Bajinkies! As for splitting up – why not? It’s good for creating diversions at one end and strike at the other (where we want to!)
It’s tough to tell, but is it Kiwi speaking in the first panel?
Yeah, it’s not to obvious. I didn’t even see her till you pointed her out.
It looked like Alex was talking to himself…
If they’re splitting,that means they’re probably doing a two prong attack?!?
I don’t understand the monologue here. It looks like Alex is just babbling to himself by answering his comments in the first panel by saying “I know” in the second panel. Was one of these speech bubbles supposed to be Nastajia’s?
I agree with you. It seems like the first line should have been Nastajia’s.
Kiwi speaks, then Alex.
It’s not so obvious in the 1st panel.
Maybe this would be a good time for them to use names.
“I don’t like this plan, Alex.”
“I know, Kiwi…”
Also, love the cloudscape.
Indeed, it’s Kiwi speaking in the first panel.
Wow, I did not see Kiwi there. Contrast is everything. Now that I’m looking, I hadn’t noticed Paddington blending in there, either. As soon as I saw the cloud-covered sunset and the two characters that belonged in that romantic shot the most, I was done looking at the first panel.
The new dialogue helps clarify what’s happening, though it might still require a small double-take for a new reader.
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This page is its own brand of beautiful! If I had more monies, I’d be buying it to add to my Dreamland print collection!
Panel one… who is supposed to be talking? looks like Alex, but that doesn’t seem right.
Fixed the dialogue to make it clearer who’s speaking.
Thank you all!
(you may have to do a SHIFT-REFRESH to load the new version)
good change – Bennel was right – that fixes it so that you notice Kiwi there even at this resolution. HOWEVER…I don’t like eliminating Dan’s strategy, written down and brought to Dreamland in the medicine bag…would Alex remember all of it? Maybe if you add in a page where Dan/Nicole drill him on remembering things from time to time. As unpleasant as it is, I think a better solution might be to change the canon and go back and have Orion return the bag to Alex, since it is needed for Dan (the uncrowned King) to make his voice heard in Dreamland…
Alex doesn’t have to remember it. Dan told the plan to the sword (which can talk, in Dreamland at least).
ha! i knew it! since Orion is so wise, he would foresee Dan needing this for strategic communication. He would have given it back to Alex for Dan, until such time as Dan is able to come to Dreamland himself.
Thanks, Scott. That helps a lot!
Splitting up has worked in the past. It helped them win the battle on Astoria, and Felicity, Paddington, and Kiwi as sky pirates was just awesome.
I just hate it when the group decides to split the party.
whoa….loving the cloud in the background.
New puppy jumped out of my moving car today. She saw a squirrel.
She’s okay. But pretty banged up.
This took up most of my morning… so my renders got set up a bit late.
I’ll post a bit late. Sorry.
Puppies are family.
Family comes first, always.
You’re good; take whatever time you need to take care of that pooch.
OMG, that’s the stuff right out of my nightmares. Really. Some of my worst nightmares are of my dog running after bears or into traffic.
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