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Happy Monday!
Sorry for the delay this morning!
I’m still tweaking the dialogue. But this should work for now.
🙂
The Dreamland Chronicles
The Dreamland Chronicles by Scott Christian Sava
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It looks great! Though do Felicity’s eyes seem especially wide? Especially the third panel, she’s got a “Duuuuude!” stare. I think the eyelashes aren’t as heavy/eyelids are missing or something.
It looks like there’s maybe some FOV distortion along the sides of the panels? Kind of like a fish-eye lens effect, making Felicity’s face (and thus her eyes) seem larger than usual.
I agree, she’s got the same expression in both panels and it’s like she drifted off into her own little world there. She should at least have some kind of reaction in the 3rd panel.
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Still rank no12.
I thought her eyes looked funny too, particularly in panel 3 (and maybe 4).
I see what Sven is talking about, but i also think her pupils should be a little bigger as they seem to be in the shade right now.
The Chief’s headress is FABULOUS! That would put a Vegas showgirl to shame. 🙂
Uh-oh. That doesn’t sound good. Are we about to see more of Nic’s handywork?
Something went wrong with the wide angle filter in the last panel. Felicity’s face is badly warped.
That’s Beautiful… what is that? velvet?
Tuesday’s page will go up in the morning.
Whoo made it through the entire story for the first time in 4 days! I am LOVING this and now that I am caught up can’t wait to see what happens next.
Scott- Great job on making such an AMAZING comic! You have a new fan now. 🙂
“…Though I fear you are no closer to your goal.”
Felicity’s eyes tells me otherwise. She has already solved the riddle that protects the tablet.
Did you see the look of Felicity’s face in the left corner of the fourth panel?
Makes one suspect she already knows something…! 😉
Maybe the tablet is up high and you must have to climb to reach it. She is a very good climber after all.
Just thought I’d say, the Artwork is Amazing!
Or maybe she just sees a lot of shiny things… 🙂 She does like shiny stuff after all. 😉
Yay! Thanks for reading!
ANd welcome to Dreamland!
Thanks!
Having trouble with this page, guys.
Might be another hour.
It’s a full page splash.
Now the Pains begin! LOL It’s so hard sometimes waiting for the next page…
but well worth it!
LOL of course, because I just posted how painful it can be waiting! LOL
Take your time…. you can’t rush art!
I just thought. I see a lot of potential for a background story with felicity here. 😀