comics for May 7, 2007 – 05/07/2007
Kiwi reminds me of SuicideGirls.
Claudia, she’d need more tattoos.
Should be “we’re entering its cave”. There is no apostrophe in the possessive “its”.
Kiwi’s face = priceless.
Oh, I dunno. I’m sure I could come up with a price for it.
You’d think that she would have explained aobut the kraken on the way to the cave, since Alex already asked.
Nastajia could not risk discussing it around Horatio… or Felicity. She knows the rest of the party as childhood friends and trusts them implicitly. But not so the other two. Remember, it’s what her parents risked everything (and possibly died) for. She does not want to risk Nicodemus finding the tablets first…
Horatio was told by the King that Nastajia and party asked for a tour of the Mer kingdom, with the Kraken cave being foremost – a rather clever cover story. If she had to explain to the party about the Kraken, then that would not fit with Horatio’s orders. Thus the ruse would be up and Horatio would be suspicious and think they had an ulterior motive to go to Kraken Cave. Remember, everyone is a potential spy…
ok, we’ve known it was a kraken’s cave for, like, two or three pages now.
where has Kiwi been?
Actually that was a private discussion between the Mer-ger King and Nastajia. None of the rest of the gang heard that. It’s supposed to be very hush-hush because the last thing they need is for a spy to report to Nicodemus about their search for the hidden tablets of pre-history.
Ivy’s eyeliner’s a little messed up.
And THAT, ladies and gentlemen, is the difference between water-PROOF, and water-RESISTANT…
In the Case of Kiwi vs. Dreamland Cosmetics:
Kiwi: Your ads claimed that water wouldn’t affect my eyeliner!
Ad Exec: Well, we didn’t expect you to actually believe us…
its cave. not it’s.
these errors are a)distracting and b)a bad example for kids. i hope you can fix them before the print editions?
So far your record for pointing out “errors” that aren’t erroneous at all kinda detracts from your few successes with apostrophes in “its”. Leads a person to believe that you don’t actually have a clue whether something is erroneous or not past the three-letter mark, and thus certainly aren’t any sort of authority to be whining about the general error-trend.
What few grammatical errors there have been in the comic so far have been far outstripped by the graphical errors, common misunderstandings of physics and jarring character personality inconsistencies…
… and yet I’m still here, and the comic is still entertaining… and most kids wouldn’t notice any of the above because their span of experience is insufficient to have formed an average baseline for such things.
heh heh heh…
I love Kiwi’s face…
Also, in panel 3 Paddington looks like he could blend in. Of course, I noticed him, and you guys probably did too…but check it again. It looks like he’s trying to hide
Kiwi: “We’re entering its cave why?”
Nastajia: “Because the strategy guide we read in Ashendel said to.”
Alex: “And the developers made this a linear RPG not sandbox…”
What Guide was that? It didn’t tell you that you could go around the back and crouch/walk into the wall by the red coral to glitch through right ontop of the tablet?
And skip the boss-fight?
Kraken drops mad loot, y’know.
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