If you already found something you’re happy with, however, I congratulate you, and hope you all the best. The comic is great!

What happaned to your paneling? I took the time and looked back at the start and read through. When this comic first started, you had creative use of paneling and more panels to the page, along with word baloons that could span a panle or so to give flow to the page and showing different angles and depths of views. The story actually progressed very nicely and at a pace that kept interest in reading such a long story.

But as if late, you’bve been useing the same paneling style of three/four or so wide shot panels a page for nearly every page and it’s becoming more and more dull and the story is starting to creep along very slowly as not much is happening. It seems like your now trying to capture every single character movment as they speak instead of doing things in a.. I’m unsure how to put it, in a comic style mindset?

The curent page could have easily had two or three panels and more added to it if they were not wide panel views. And while Nicodemus speaks the others just stand there starring.. and.. look at each other? Does that really have to be shown?

Just saying theres a lot beter ways this could have been planed out, and although it all looks amazing and I comment you on the fine work on the models, the story in terms of how it’s progressing is just slowing down to much and is getting boring. Not saying everything has to be action packed, but, using this curent page as an example.. having the gang standing the same way for two, showing just slight movement from Nicodemus as he talks, then the last showing the gang look at each other. Do we really have to see them all looking at Nicodemus unmoving for two pannles? A change of angle, different depths, something to keep the story aspect interesting instead of just “Oh look cool 3D models!”. Like the comic use to do in the early chapters, it’s like it lost what it once had.