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By: LoLSuffer

LoLSuffer — Tue, 17 Jul 2012 03:58:09 +0000

LOL I know what you mean: GET IN BED! >:)

By: Bennel

Bennel — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 00:36:34 +0000

Don’t get your hopes up about Alex being able to read; it might be a picture.

By: Destiny

Destiny — Sat, 24 Sep 2011 16:53:49 +0000

Whoever edits and publseihs these articles really knows what they’re doing.

By: Random dood.

Random dood. — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 20:16:39 +0000

Hur hur hur, Nicole wants him in bed.

And I think that the girl-friend that used to play with Nicole might be Feli!

By: TekServer

TekServer — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 16:42:54 +0000

I have an observation different from all of the above:

Is it just me, or does Alex’s appearance in the “real world” now seem more boyish, as compared with a more mature appearance in Dreamland? Meh, maybe it’s just the armor …

By: bmonk

bmonk — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 21:36:57 +0000

The dialogue works either way; this is a bit more subtle. And, either one would be oblique enough that it’s still PG, I hope: there’s a picture out there that, if a child sees it, they see the 13 dolphins.

By: Tarlonis

Tarlonis — Thu, 11 Dec 2008 13:13:02 +0000

Personally I vote for the dialogue of “do it right now” I don’t think it’s dirty unless you choose to interpret it as such, and I DO CHOOSE it so…gimme my joke next time. =-)

By: Megan

Megan — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 13:37:31 +0000

I think your changes work quite well thanks

By: Amber

Amber — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 05:39:30 +0000

Here where I think he’s going with this Cat girls missing best friend from dream land was the brainy “Dreamland’s not real” girl…. Which if you think about it is Awesome. It’ll totally take her down a peg or to and bring the story in a new light. I mean Felicity is dying. Well she stay on the river De-Nile or well she work to save her and maybe send a message to her old friend via Alex….. just a though.

By: L.S. Taylor

L.S. Taylor — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 04:57:02 +0000

It works. Don’t worry.