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I love what Tracy has done with Nicole; especially her skin tone. It’s much more natural looking than it was. Not that it was bad, by any means! (We love you Scott! ?) Let me put it a different way: in the original, when Nicole was first introduced, I didn’t immediately understand that she was African American. Her skin tone was a little darker than the twins’, but still pretty light. The other commenters clued me in, and once I realized, I saw the other clues in her facial features. (I can be pretty oblivious sometimes. ?) In Tracy’s version, there is no doubt about Nicole’s ethnicity. She took everything that was beautiful about Nicole and made her more so.
On an unrelated note, Scott: remember how you used to bold & italicize certain words, frequently and seemingly at random? I hope you won’t take offense when I say I’m glad Tracy took those out. ?
I agree with you 100%
Now, if we go to a reprint with a big publisher one day (my hope), I would also re-write some pages too. But it’s SUCH an improvement… I’m loving every page.