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I’ve gotten in the habit of reading these side by side with the originals. I find it fascinating to see all the little differences. Some are unequivocal improvements. For example, in the original the dialog in the last panel read, “Seek out the answers that your parents risked everything for.” A very minor thing, but Tracy’s version, with the corrected grammar, seems much more in character for Arvamas.
Other changes are neither better nor worse, just different. In the original, Nastajia’s eyes have a slight tilt to them, giving her a more exotic appearance. Tracy’s version, without the tilt and wider, are less exotic but more expressive.
Just my take, fwiw.
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